tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-511932501301931260.post6030711735234813661..comments2012-10-12T05:50:26.100-07:00Comments on Southern Fried Shorts: An Empty SacrificeT.J. McIntyrehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04838932103635417150noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-511932501301931260.post-80088294872721153522010-04-23T19:51:46.789-07:002010-04-23T19:51:46.789-07:00Thanks John! I'm glad the site is working now....Thanks John! I'm glad the site is working now.T.J. McIntyrehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04838932103635417150noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-511932501301931260.post-55492730166604613722010-04-23T17:49:51.566-07:002010-04-23T17:49:51.566-07:00Pungent descriptions, particularly in the material...Pungent descriptions, particularly in the materials of the third to last paragraph. Aluminum, fiberglass, no sky and lots of mosquitoes. Accomplishes a strong mood.<br /><br />Site is loading much better now. I wouldn't be disheartened by the lack of comments on this one - good chance a lot of people were unable to get the Comments feature to load. Keep heart, keep writing. Maybe a Worthwhile Sacrifice next week?John Wiswellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07416044628686736927noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-511932501301931260.post-33774001282452042652010-04-22T17:42:08.888-07:002010-04-22T17:42:08.888-07:00Thanks, Marisa! I'm glad you enjoyed it :)Thanks, Marisa! I'm glad you enjoyed it :)T.J. McIntyrehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04838932103635417150noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-511932501301931260.post-64110056384400900232010-04-22T17:41:37.247-07:002010-04-22T17:41:37.247-07:00Oh, the image of him walking away from the trapped...Oh, the image of him walking away from the trapped dog just hurt!<br /><br />Strong story of dystopian change.<br /><br />Last sentence was wonderful.Marisa Birnshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17945909737147497606noreply@blogger.com